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The Portable Writer’s Conference

Your Guide to Getting and Staying Published


Edited by Stephen Blake Mettee

 

$19.95 ($29.95 Canada) • 464 pp •Trade Paperback 

ISBN 1-884956-57-2

 

Sample Chapter

 

Excerpt from

Selling Yourself in a Query Letter

Not the time to be modest

by Betsy Mitchell, editor-in-chief of Warner Books’ science fiction/fantasy line, Aspect.

 

The next time you’re ready to offer a manuscript, take time to create a query or cover letter that will help make that sale. Editors need a reason to buy your manuscript. You may have a terrific story to tell, an interesting new writing style, a nonfiction topic that nobody’s hit on yet…but your manuscript still must do battle with a pile of others sitting on the editor’s desk. Clinch that sale in your cover letter, with every personal "selling point" you can think of.

 

Whether they work on fiction or nonfiction books, editors must create what are called "fact sheets" or "tip sheets" for every manuscript they acquire. These are quick guides to both the book and the author that go from the editor’s desk to every department in the publishing house. They are a key reference tool for sales representatives during sales conference—and the reps’ primary source of information for selling the book into stores. The advertising department uses fact sheets as the basis for writing catalog copy and advertisements. Publicists rely on them to create accurate press releases and letters that accompany advance galleys.

 

Your manuscript’s selling points will help every step of the way toward getting your book into the stores. But most important, a list of strong selling points helps an editor obtain the OK to buy your manuscript. So the more you can present to an editor, the better your chances of making that sale.

 

Not every selling point listed here will apply to every author. For example, an author’s sales history on his or her previous titles is the most important selling point on any fact sheet—but naturally a first novelist or beginning nonfiction writer has no previous sales. If that’s your situation, then concentrate on making the most of your other qualifications.

 

Here are the most important selling points, with explanations of each:

 

Best-selling track record
Give the latest sales figures for your previous titles; sell-thru percentage (the number of copies sold out of the total shipped—but mention only if this is 65 percent or better); copies in print and average monthly reorder; any appearances on best-seller lists.

 

First-timers naturally will have no previous sales history—but remember, every author was at this point once in his or her career. If that’s your situation, list several “comparative titles” to what you’ve written: successful books already in print that have similar appeal to yours in terms of audience and author qualification. For example, a female mystery novelist offering a quirky new character who might do well as the centerpiece of a long-running series can say that she is hoping to click with fans of Sue Grafton and Sara Paretsky. Or a pediatrician writing about his theory of child-rearing could list his qualifications as a doctor and compare his approach to that of Penelope Leach or T. Berry Brazelton.

 


Upward sales trend
If each of your books is selling better than the last, that proves your audience of readers is growing.

 

Awards received
Awards for your writing come first. Awards in other fields, if they are pertinent to the manuscript you’re offering, should be mentioned. For example, if you’re a prize dog breeder writing an exposé on puppy farms, tell how many ribbons and titles your dogs have received.

 

     
       
         
     
         
     
     
 
 

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